Monday, December 25, 2006

Woh Hisse ...

Darmiyan sookhte darakhton ke, aaj jab nazar utha kar dekha toh kshitij par kahin door ek badal ka lihaf udta nazar aaya. Dagmagate kadam baarsih ki nirlajj boondon ko andekha kar badh chale, ki railing ke sahare tek lagayeinge aur oonchi imarton ko paani ke is taraf se samajhne ki koshish kareinge. mai chala, mere kadam badhe, par woh wahin reh gaya. Pehli baar nahi hua hai aisa, bahut baar peeche choot chuka hoon, is martaba baarish zor ki thi aur railing ki taraf badhti peeth zehen mein dar paida kar rahi thi. Hisse choddkar chal padna seerat na ban jaye kahin yeh dua har dar pe mang chuka hoon. Us adalat mein meri arzi pahunchti hi nahi aur jab bulayeinge tab yeh nahi dekheinge ki meri kitini koshishon ko unhone khud hi nazarandaz kar diya tha. Kaash mujhe sangeet ka gyan hota, kaash mai sur aur taal samajh sakta - kehte hain ki gaane wala apni rooh ka koi hissa chodd jata hai hamesha ke liye apni nazmo mein, kuch seekh leta ki har baar kam hote aap, kaise naye raaste tai kar lete hain ...................... mehfil-e-dard ke siva thikaane kaise mil jaate hain

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

ek klisht, kathin kintu marm-sparshi rachna. hriday sparsh karne ki kala mein purnta prapt karne ki disha mein ek saarthak and kafi hudd tak safal prayas.

Anil Sharma said...

Have read all the previous blogs and came to know that you are woring for an investment bank and struggling with what social scientists would term as Existential void. Got everything and still emptyhanded. Here is another person who loves to decipher beauty in words and simultaneously lives with the fact that he can not create the beauty. Probably these comments wouldn't make any difference, but would still like to congratulate you for these posts. Keep up the good work.

Anonymous said...

agar sambhav ho to ise purane rupp mein parivartit karne ka kast karen.. isme readibility kuch kam hai..aankhon ko taqleef ho rahi thi tartamya banane mein..

Sapphire said...

Interesting work, though some of them had a little touch of indifference to them. It's great to come across someone who reacts. Hope it continues. :)

Anonymous said...

nav varsh ki hardik shubhkamnayen!!

Unknown said...

Accidentally visited ur blog but i must say that ur hindi is too good ....giving a good competition to Javed Akhtar saab....ur Nazms and the mausiqui leave a lasting impact on readers ...keep up the good work...enjoy...